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You pulled your knees to your chin and hugged them. The late night clouds moved away from the moon, letting the beams dance on your cheeks and reflect off your hair.  

You glanced a pile of letters on a small table. They were all from your beloved from distance places that seemed to far away. Why did he have to join the army? Sadness washed over your head and you slowly put your head on your knees.

“Bonk” You looked up. “Bonk”. There it was again. Squinting you stood and walked to the glass doors that led to the balcony. “Bonk” A small pebble bounced off the windowpane. You stared at it and then slowly pushed the doors open. The cool winds made the curtains fly and your hair spin around your face. You looked out across the dark landscape and saw nothing, but the shadows of the trees. Hesitatively you stepped out onto the balcony, pulling your clothes around you.

“(Y/n)!”

You jumped so badly and nearly fell over. You heard a sweet and familiar laugh. You heart stopped in your chest and you scrambled to the edge of the stone railing. You looked down and there he was. He blond hair was wind tousled and looked like he just got off the plane in his uniform. In one hand he held an army hat and the other was in pocket. He looked exactly how you remembered him, perfect. Tears flowed down your cheeks.

He smiled up at you and whispered, “I’m home (y/n).”

Though your salty tears you managed a smile, “Welcome home Germany.”

He looked kindly at you, “I have something for you,” he said. Before you could protest, he knelt to the dew damp grass and from his pocket pulled a dark box. He opened it and a simple ring glinted inside. “(Y/n)?” you stared at him, “Will you marry me?”

You at him and you looked down. “You’re a jerk you know that?”

“Yes.”

“You left me here…there were times when I thought you’d never come home…and if you did…it would be in a box.”

“I know…I’m sorry.”

You shook your head, the tears kept coming, “But…I-I still love you?” you looked at him, “How is that?”

“I’ll never leave you again.” He promised. You nodded, “Will you marry me?” You nodded silently. “I’ll come up.” He said.

“No, wait.” You said. You were already over the railing and making your down.

“(Y/n)!” Germany cried and rushed forward and caught you as your fell.

You both went tumbling down the lawn. You groaned and looked up, “Germany! Are you alright?!” he was still under you. “Germany?” you whimpered.

Suddenly he leaned up and kissed you. He opened his eyes and grinned, “I’m right here.” You stared at him, not sure if you were angry or happy. You opened your mouth, but he took you hand and slipped a cool metal band around you finger. You glanced at it and then he pulled you into his strong arms, his safe arms. “I want you to be mine forever.”

You anger slipped away and you spoke into his soft hair, “I already was.”
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BrokenHapppiness Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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AmarindaCrosstin Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
With my luck, Luddy wouldn't notice the window was open and I'd get hit in the face with a pebble. DX
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha I should do a "reality" or second path story off that. 
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AmarindaCrosstin Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
YAY~!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If it ever happens I'll let you know 
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AmarindaCrosstin Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
Kay. Thanks!
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NatureTune Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student General Artist
that`s modern Juliet *grinns* Woohooooo! 

Why sit alone on the balcony and stare at her beloved on the ground, when you can cuddle up to him and even get a kiss. Hmm. Evil plotting in progress. Boing! Boing! 

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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Logic 
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
How sweet
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XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I...cried....I LOVE YOU GERMANY
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure he loves you too ^^
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I cried a little ;3;
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh?! I'm sorry you cried :worry: 
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
NOT IN A BAD WAY OMG NOT AT ALL :D
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay ^^; If crying is good. I'm glad you cried the good kind...if that makes sense. 
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It does XD I was crying from happiness, so it's a good thing!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If it's a good thing...then I'm happy for you.
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! :D
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GoldenWingedAngel Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OMG!! This is so cute!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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GoldenWingedAngel Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If a guy proposed to me like this I would have to marry him
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I bet he would hope so 
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GoldenWingedAngel Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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GoldenWingedAngel Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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zekka12 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
Germany! I almost swished you sorry T.T
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry. I don't think he minds too much ^^
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zekka12 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
I would hope not Prussia's is mad he didn't get a kiss
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why should he get one 7 3 7(Don't worry if he does Germany will protect you)
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zekka12 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
I am much more awesome than him so Germany will do that for me I just have to pay him with a kiss
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure he'll be more than willing to protect you then ^^


Sucks for Prussia...^^
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zekka12 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
it does hungry may give him a kiss
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, she might if he's lucky ^^
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was adorable! I love it!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww Thank you ^^
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah! No problem ^^
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rubyshadow13 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Go Ludwig! Such a cute way to propose.
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ludwig: ..Ah Thank you 7/////7
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haruhifujioka14 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I love this! I just love Germany.
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad. Thank you very much ^^
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haruhifujioka14 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student General Artist
no problem!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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haruhifujioka14 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student General Artist
i wanna marry germany now!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I hope you have a happy wedding! ^^
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haruhifujioka14 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student General Artist
awww thank you very much!!! ^^
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome ^^ That's what I made this for
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SecretGermanyLover Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What if he didn't catch me? Would I be dead? Mortally wounded?!! COULD I STILL HAVE LEMONNESS WITH HIM?!!!!!!!
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well...that's true...we don't know how high the balcony was...but let's just say it's a good thing he caught you ^^
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frostedcranberries Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist
For some reason, when the reader was creeping it out onto the balconey, I could imagine this happening. X'D
Reader: {:iconsneakplz:)
:icongermanrageplz:{(YOUR NAME!)
Reader: {OH, HOLY S***! :icontumbleplz:)
Anyway, that was really sweet. I loved it! :icongreatjobplz:
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MidnightSNow17 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much ^^
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